IT’S POSSIBLE THAT the single most popular questions I get in my manuscript services practice are why and when to write an introduction. People frequently send me their intros again and again as they edit them, and at some point I stop them and tell them to keep what they have and wait to write more until they’ve written the book. Writing your introduction before that is like buying the shoes you’ll wear on the Today show before you’ve done the work on your book. Fun, absolutely, but somewhat premature, though having done it you can check it off your to-do list, yes? And if having those shoes in your closet kicks you back to work each day, where’s the harm? But you don’t know who you’ll be when you finish. And you certainly don’t know what book you are introducing until you finish it. So why write an introduction? Writer and Jeff Goins knows why. Poised to soon publish his third book, he was kind enough to tackle this topic for us here. See what you think.
Introductions: Why You Should Write Them (Even If Don’t Like Them)
By Jeff Goins
Every author has to deal with it. It’s the hardest part of a book to write, which is ironic because it’s the first thing that greets a reader’s eyes. What is it?
The introduction.
Writing intros makes some writers go nuts, which is why many don’t even bother. But this is an important part of your work, something well worth the hassle and heartache.
Before we talk about how to write introductions, though, let’s talk about why they’re important. Just like crafting a quality lead for an article earns you the attention of an audience, a book’s intro gets readers to sit down and take your words seriously. A good introduction invites the reader deep into the meat of a book and helps her understand what to expect. It’s a promise that you spend the rest of the book fulfilling.
A good introduction makes three propositions: 1) why this book is worth your time, 2) why you should trust the narrator, and 3) why you should keep reading. These don’t have to be explicit, and it’s probably best if they’re not, but they should be clear. A good introduction sets expectations without giving away everything. It builds rapport, whetting the appetite without fully satisfying the reader. Left with a taste for more, we have no choice but to continue reading.
Writing an introduction should come first—and last. Put something down to organize your thoughts and intent for writing, then use those to guide the rest of the writing process. Of course, when you finish, the book will have taken on a life of its own and your original intent look nothing like the finished product. Which is why it’s a good idea to rewrite the intro once you’re done with the book.
An introduction is not throwaway content. For some readers, it will be the only thing read. Use this opportunity wisely, and don’t miss your chance to connect with the audience in a powerful way that will hook them for the rest of the book.
The In-Between, an excerpt
Life Between the Panels
How we spend our days, according to Annie Dillard, is how we spend our lives. If that’s true, then I spend most of my life waiting. Waiting in the checkout line at the grocery store. Waiting to rent a movie. Waiting for the movie to end. Waiting to turn thirty. Waiting for the weekend. Waiting for vacation.
Waiting, waiting, waiting.
Life is an endless series of appointments and phone calls and procrastinated tasks that need to, but sometimes never, get done. It’s a long list of incomplete projects and broken promises that tomorrow will be better. It’s being put on hold and waiting in office lobbies and watching that stupid hourglass rotate again and again on the computer screen. It’s load times and legal processes — long, drawn-out bureaucratic systems that leave me sitting, watching the clock.
Life is one big wait.
Once an adventure seeker, my days are now full of responsibility. Gone are the days of hopping trains through Europe and trekking across the country in a van. Now, things have slowed down. As a dad, husband, and homeowner, I’ve got more than a few things on my plate. But despite this busyness, most days feel fairly static, as if everything is standing still. And in this stillness, I’m learning to be present, to acknowledge the lessons life is trying to teach me. Because even in an adventure, you have to wait, to deal with what happens when things don’t turn out the way you expect.
Between raising a child and learning to be a better spouse, all while managing the challenges of working from home and starting a business with less time than before, I’m feeling the tension between how I used to live and what’s reality. My schedule is full of obligations and opportunities that tempt me to push through the now, moving on to the next thing. I’m tempted with distractions, to linger in the glory of the past or hold out hope for a better future. These are all ways I distance myself from the moment. And I wonder why the abundant life I’ve been searching for seems so evasive, even taunting at times.
In frustration, I’m confronted with an old lesson of letting go, of looking beyond personal ambition and replacing it with something better. The slow growth that happens when I surrender to what life — and maybe God — is trying to teach me. So it seems, despite a penchant for travel, that the antidote to my restlessness is not another trip or adventure, but a deep abiding in where I am right now. How does this happen? With waiting. Normal, everyday situations that test my patience and cause me to reflect on what really matters. I don’t like it, but I’m starting to see the value of the times in between the big moments in life.
I’ve spent my whole life longing for the next season, hoping better things would come when I graduated or got married or gave my life to a career worthy of my talents. But now I’m not sure holding out for what’s to come is the smartest strategy. And I have a feeling that I’m not alone.
We all want to live meaningful lives full of experiences we can be proud of. We all want a great story to tell our grandchildren. But many of us fail to recognize that the best moments are the ones happening right now.
Maybe the “good stuff ” isn’t ahead of or behind us. Maybe it’s somewhere in between. Right in the midst of this moment, here and now. Maybe Annie Dillard is right. Maybe what we call “mundane,” what feels boring and ordinary, is really how we spend our lives. And we have an opportunity to make of it what we will — to resent its lack of adventure or rejoice in its beauty. Perhaps, the abundant life we’ve been seeking has little to do with big events and comes in a subtler form: embracing the pauses in between major beats.
Author’s bio
Jeff Goins is a full-time blogger, speaker and author. He frequently speaks and writes about how to make a difference in the world through our words and actions. You can follow him online at his website.
Originally from Chicago, Goins graduated from Illinois College and spent the next year on the road with a band. Since studying abroad in Spain, he has always had a passion for travel, missions, and making a difference in the world. His first book, Wrecked: When A Broken World Slams Into Your Comfortable Life, addresses the issue of how we live purpose-filled lives by serving the needs of others. The In-Between: Embracing The Tension Between Now and the Next Big Thing is his most recent book.
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Denise says
I just had a discussion yesterday about writing the introduction. I’m sure my bullet points set to guide my writing will change as the book develops. Looking forward to reading more of The In-Between.
Jeff Goins says
Thanks, Denise!
Elizabeth says
Jeff, I loved your piece on waiting. I also believe our life is lived in those moments.
I’ve been looking at memoirs I’ve read to see if they do or don’t have an Introduction. I think mine might need one. Here’s what I learned.
Jeannette Walls in “The Glass Castle” doesn’t. She dives right into the story about seeing her mother dumpster diving on a NYC street as the author passes by in a taxi.
Maya Angelou’s “I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings,” “Running in the Family” by Michael Ondaatje and Gail Caldwell’s Let’s Take the Long Way Home” all have brief openings of two or so paragraph. “While Drinking: A Love Story” by Carol Knapp has a Prologue of one and a half pages.
So when do you have an intro and when do you jump right into the story? When is an intro brief and when is it longer?
Thanks Marion and Jeff
Jeff Goins says
That might be a question for the expert (Marion). In my case, my previous book was nonfiction advice, so it was important to prepare my readers for a lot more narrative. Also, the book itself has a memoir feel but with some advicey interstices in between each part of the book.
I wasn’t just telling a story; I was proving an argument and wanted the reader to be ready for it. I’ve seen other authors do prefaces and brief author’s notes for their memoirs. I think it just depends on the subject matter. I write introductions for all my books.
An intro is the thing you want to say about the content to prepare the reader for what’s to come. If you don’t need to do that (because the book is self-explanatory), then it might be unnecessary.
Jody says
Thanks for the article…and your excerpt. I’m living the “in-between” this summer…the nest is emptying, bankruptcy is pending, and every day I’m just trying to be present with the way things are…and not how they will be when the nest is emptied and we have a new financial beginning. Many thanks!
Jeff Goins says
You’re welcome, Jody! I’m so glad to hear that. I think we are always in the in-between. We’re always waiting for something and letting go of something else. It can be a beautiful thing.
Katherine says
Loved this – “Perhaps, the abundant life we’ve been seeking has little to do with big events and comes in a subtler form: embracing the pauses in between major beats.”
Sure speaks to me today. Thank you.
Jeff Goins says
I’m sure glad to hear that, Katherine!
Nancy says
I am laughing when I arrived at the end of this post. I am stressing over an introduction and after reading this post, I am now happy to state, it can wait!
Jeff Goins says
Awesome! I’m so glad to hear that.
Kathy Sievers says
I have written and re-written my manual four times and am finally nearing completion. The introduction that I wrote initially is completely off base now. I have a much better idea what the manual is about now that I have written and edited it, and taught with it. I also watched another instructor teach with it. So an introduction now will have a much firmer grasp of the reality and value of the manual, which will also me more clear to prospective readers. Thanks for your info.
Deborah says
Hi Jeff,
Love the idea of your book. As Americans, always wanting to do more, see more, experience more, work more, be more – it never ends. And we want it now. But what I have experienced with age is that if I don’t learn the lesson I’ve been given the first time, and for me it is a higher power, it will keep coming back again until I make peace with it, learn it, finally accomplishing the lesson I was given.
I believe everything happens for a reason and with it a season of newness, so I say, embrace it, and love it as it has been given. And, when I am ready, the teacher, be that a book, a friend, or a stranger will appear, or God, to teach me what I need to know. So I guess I look at life as what can I learn today, or how I will be given an opportunity to be a blessing to others.
For my memoir, I wrote three introductions even before I ever began writing. Now, I have decided to wait to see what unfolds at the end making sure my introduction reflects my truth.
Jeff Goins says
Thanks, Deborah. I agree. We aren’t great at waiting. The intro is the hardest part for me. I rewrite it like a dozen times.
George Mulvaney says
I’ve enjoyed your blog since my friend Phil turned me on to it. Phil and I take turns posting your stuff in our writers group on FB. I just finished writing a preliminary introduction to my book after doing an outline yesterday.
After reading this post, I went back and reread my intro. Well, I got two of the three. I was pretty sure I’d have to rewrite the thing later anyway. Your post just confirms it. Thank you for sharing this, Jeff.
Sherrey Meyer says
Jeff, no matter the topic I always learn something from your writing. Today you dealt with a question I’ve been asking for months, maybe years, as I write my memoir: introduction, prologue or neither. From your words, I believe it’s an introduction, pure and simple.
I loved reading The In-Between and although I still struggle with waiting, I was happy to be reminded of this excerpt you shared today.
BTW, Marion, please don’t include me in the drawing. I proudly own Jeff’s book already.
Judith says
Marion’s advice about writing the intro early on, knowing we’ll go back to revise it, makes perfect sense. Sometimes we don’t know our true reasons for writing a book until we’ve completed it. That was certainly accurate in my case.
Jeff – I so appreciate your writing. It’s just real. Your ruminations on waiting reminded me of a quote by John O Donahue. “Take time to celebrate the quiet miracles that seek no attention.”
Annette says
Oh my word, I’ve been stuck in the tension for over a year and a half and would welcome any words or experiences Jeff has on this, yes please!
sarah conover says
Thanks for the contemplation Jeff. What scares me more than Annie Dillard’s quote is a slight, but frightening twist: how you live your days is how you will spending the day that you die. When I’m chasing that “to do” list, this thought really gives me pause. If my last breath on earth was in pursuit of an errand…ugh!
Mary says
Can’t wait to get started. Hope I win!