FINDING OUR TRUE SELVES may be one of life’s great journeys, but writing from that place is among the hardest assignments I know. How to write from your true self, and not the one you wished you were, or one who is smarter, wittier or anything else-er? I asked an expert. Let me introduce you to Michele Cushatt, whose new book is just out.
Owning Your Voice:
The Earth Needed to Help Your Reader to Fly
Let’s say right now, in between all your writing (and social media checking for research, of course) you picked up your phone and punched in the ten numbers of my cell phone.
And what if, let’s say, the phone rang several times before skipping to voice mail.
After a few seconds, you would hear the warm, clear voice of a two-year-younger me greeting you. I’d say things like, “I’m sorry I missed your call,” and “Please leave a brief message and I’ll get right back to you” and the like.
There are two problems with this entire situation. And, yes, it is a situation.
First, the two-year-younger me is lying. Flat out lying. Not intentionally, of course. But lack of malice doesn’t lend any truth. I am not, in fact, sorry I missed your call. And I will not, in fact, get right back to you. I hate the phone and will do most anything to avoid it. Which leads promptly to the second problem with our little situation:
The warm clear voice greeting you claims to be me, but it is not. That woman is no longer alive. She died November 25, 2014. In her place lives a new woman, a woman with the same birth certificate and social security number, a woman with the same husband and children and bottled hair color (“Dark Brown #003”). But a woman who isn’t the same as she once was.
Why? Because cancer stole her speech. And, thus, her life.
Squamous-cell carcinoma of the tongue, they call it. The first time in 2010, then twice more in 2014. The last time, on November 25, 2014, it demanded a nine-hour surgery to remove two-thirds of my tongue and massive reconstruction using tissue from neck, arm and leg.
But that was just the beginning. After a few weeks recovery, I began radical radiation and chemotherapy that left me, for the better part of a year, little more than a couch-bound, narcotic-fogged observer of the so-called good life.
The short of it is this: I slipped into anesthesia as a woman who made her living as a communicator. And I woke up from it a completely different woman. One who will live with a permanent speech and eating disability for the rest of her life. And one who can’t bring herself to change her cell phone voice mail.
In the years following this death and rebirth, I had to rediscover who I was. As you can imagine, it’s been both grueling and enlightening. In this multi-year process of rediscovery, I learned quite a bit about how much identity can either make or break our writing.
You see, as I fought to resurrect my life, I had a book to write. My deadline sat precisely 362 days from that devastating nine-hour surgery. The subject of said book? Finding our true identity.
Oh, the irony.
Thus, as I did hand-to-hand combat with my dwindling identity, I also had to catalogue content on the process. An impossible scenario, initially. A perfect opportunity, ultimately.
Identity is more important to writing that I ever knew.
As writers—especially memoirists—we must write from a place of solid ground. That doesn’t mean we don’t struggle and ache and agonize. If we’d wanted a bland and innocuous writing experience, we would’ve opted for prescriptive non-fiction.
Alas, no. We masochistic memoirists have chosen the bloody path. The one that requires us to do perform self-surgery, page after page. That means, at times we dig and tear and cut not knowing what we might find. Even so, we must do it from a place of secure identity if we want to produce a life-giving result to the reader.
Picture it this way: If you had woken up this morning with severe appendicitis, you wouldn’t have called up your neighbor to do the excision (unless, of course, your neighbor is a reputable surgeon). There’s not a chance you’d allow a scalpel in the hands of anyone less than confident in his skills and credentials.
The same is true for writers. Yes, we often wrestle with cavernous insecurity. We wonder if our words matter, if our stories resonate with the world, if we have what it takes to hack the process and rejection and potential pain. And yet, if we’re not careful, our insecurity will end up becoming a self-fulfilling prophecy. The very hack-writing we want to avoid ends up seeping into the very words we use.
Thus, we must fight against the insecurity trying to pull us under. We must own our voice, flaws and all. After more than two years of struggle, I’m more convinced than ever that a writer must know who she is before she can lead a reader through her story. Here are a few of the differences between a secure writer and an insecure one:
A Secure Writer …
- Follows the story, rather than chasing Desperate to grab the reader’s attention, the insecure writer tries to hard to create (embellish? fabricate?) details for the sake of sensationalism. She doesn’t unearth the story. She smothers it.
- Creates safety for the reader, rather than anxiety. It’s one thing to create tension on every page; another thing to create worry. The secure writer is able to create tension, push conundrums without rampant panic. One leads the reader to a haven in which to explore. The other scares her to the point of running away.
- Focuses on exploration, rather than an agenda. The insecure writer is defensive, self-protective, aimed at writing countermeasures for any potential rebuttal. She explains things that require no explanation, defends things that need no defense. The secure writer, however, knows who she is, what she stands for, and allows the reader to, likewise, be her own person. In other words, she trusts the process, rather than manipulates it.
None of us will do this without flaw. As long as we continue to be living, breathing, in-progress humans, we writers will fall in and out of love with ourselves, and thus in and out of a secure identity. We will vacillate between affirmations and criticisms, both internal and external, sometimes several times a day.
But we mustn’t fail to struggle. Grappling with our identity—knowing who we are, why we are, and what we are about—makes for the best kind of writing. Because only then we can we embrace our truest selves—speech disability and all—and lead our readers to do the same.
Author bio:
Michele’s first book is a memoir titled Undone: A Story of Making Peace With An Unexpected Life (Zondervan, 2015). Her second book, I Am: A 60-Day Journey To Knowing Who You Are Because of Who He Is, (Zondervan, 2017), was released on January 24, 2017. When she isn’t working on her books, Michele writes feature articles, blog posts, stories and devotional meditations for numerous publications including MOPS International, Today’s Christian Woman, InCourage, Fullfill Magazine, Hearts-at-Home, Upper Room, David C. Cook’s Quiet Hour, Standard Publishing’s Devotions, and multiple compilation books including five titles in the Chicken Soup series.
Michele and the love of her life, Troy, live in Colorado with their six children, ages 9 to 24. She enjoys a good novel, a long run, and a kitchen table filled with people. Learn more on Michele Cushatt’s website.
HOW TO WIN A COPY OF THE BOOK
I hope you enjoy Writing Lessons. Featuring well-published writers of our favorite genre, each installment takes on one short topic addressing how to write memoir.
It’s my way of saying thanks for coming by.
Love the author featured above? Did you learn something in the how-to? Then you’ve got to read the book. And you can. I am giving away one copy, and all you have to do to win is leave a comment below about something you learned from the writing lesson or the excerpt. I’ll draw winners at random (using the tool at random dot org) after entries close at midnight Monday, February 27, 2017. Unfortunately, only readers within the US domestic postal service can receive books.
Good luck!
Susan Gaissert says
I am working on a memoir and I appreciated the secure writer tips. Follow the story. Explore. That’s what I think I’ve been doing instinctively, and now I will check myself periodically to make sure I’m doing that.
Michele Cushatt says
To explore is to find the less-than-obvious. This makes for thrilling and captivating writing. Because both you and the reader end up a bit amazed and surprised. Enjoy the journey, Susan.
Annette M Hadley says
Those close to me know that I am writing a non-fiction book, From Fear to Love: One Woman’s Courageous Journey Through Trauma Recovery. I’m using my relatively newfound voice to tell my story, my deepest truth. With love and compassion.
Thank goodness I know (I mean, I REALLY know) not to judge my story in comparison with anyone else’s. That said, I can still stand in awe of a woman whose personal pain and growth jump off the page in resonance with my heart.
Her name is Michele Cushatt.
Michele, I stand in awe of you and your truth. And I send you love, strength, peace and courage for your journey.
Michele Cushatt says
Thank you, Annette. Deeply grateful.
Kathleen Sievers says
I like the way the author uses her writing voice to sharpen the reality of losing her normal speaking voice. She writes with unflinching honesty in a very challenging situation. Most importantly, she writes from the other side of the experience, which makes the power of her voice even stronger.
Michele Cushatt says
Thank you, Kathleen. I appreciate your input.
Sue Morris says
I identified and wanted to know more when Michele wrote: Grappling with our identity—knowing who we are, why we are, and what we are about-makes for the best kind of writing.
It is difficult to write about the rediscovery process in a memoir. I am attempting the same.
Thanks for this!
Sue
Michele Cushatt says
You’ve entered into brave work, Sue. Press on.
Jennifer K. Powell says
“As writers—especially memoirists—we must write from a place of solid ground. ” Yes, that’s what I needed. Currently writing about my journey through breast cancer and this post really resonated with me. Thank you.
Michele Cushatt says
If anything shakes up solid ground it’s cancer. You’ve got this, friend. Don’t stop mining until you find unflinching rock.
Jennifer K. Powell says
Thank you! :)
Jean S says
Hello. And thank you. Two days ago I taped Dereck Walcott’s poem, Love After Love, to my bathroom mirror. Tonight, I read your post and am reminded I will fall in and out of love with myself. And this is just human. A perfect Valentine thought for me as I poke at my single self at 62 years of age. The more I explore my loneliness, the less lonely I feel. Just starting to write my memoir. Grateful for all your inspiration.
Anne Skyvington says
“Follow the story” sounds so simple that, like many such concepts, if you truly understand it and can do it, is certainly the way to go. Thanks for the tip.
Karen DeBonis says
Hmmm. Creating detail for the sake of sensationalism. That’s got me thinking and I’m going to look at my memoir draft to check myself on that. Thanks for that tip.
Connie Morrison says
I, too, am writing a difficult memoir but the difficulty has dwindled in comparison after reading this. The tips are invaluable to me, and I appreciate the author’s forthrightness.
Kelly S says
The idea of discovering my own identity long before I can responsibly lead my reader through the twists and turns and caverns of my story offers great encouragement to me! Thank you for writing this!
Robin Dorko says
You’re talking about courageous writing. I don’t understand this, but sometimes it’s easier for me to write for my blog with my true voice than to speak with my true voice. I learn from my writing self who I am and then try to integrate that person into my public self.
Annette says
I like her voice, she’s sassy and real, and I’d love to read more!
Lucy Maynard says
I remember talking with Dr. Lauren Ayers about my desire to write. The desire is so strong within me; however, I question who would want to read my writings?
She immediately responded that that wasn’t the purpose of writing—“you write because you have something to share about you.” And, now, this article comes to me and I imagine that I have not really found my “true self.” Michele, thank you for sharing your deeply personal story and helping me rediscover the real purpose for writing my memoir.
Ting Elger says
I am an insecure, lacking confidence and always quick to underestimate myself. This is like a hit and directed to me!
Thank you- I will try to follow and adhere to your advise.
Stephanie Turner says
I came at my book (a memoir about women in my family) with an agenda, but I’m starting to see the importance of laying it aside and simply seeing everyone for who they are/were, without judging. Thank you.
Barbara Olsen says
The idea of unearthing the story, rather than chasing it, really spoke to me. As an artist and writer, it reminds me of Michelangelo’s dictum that he was merely freeing the form from the slab of granite he was chipping away at.
Toni Giarnese says
It’s time to leave some skin on the sidewalk.
marion says
Yes it is.
Dennie DeBellis says
I will turn 61 in July, and if anyone had asked me nearly twenty years ago, when I got sober, if I thought my future self would still be doubtful and insecure, I would have replied with a resounding “absolutely not.” I had such hopes for myself back then. How I wish I’d left my insecurities in those bottles. But they followed me. To this day, I continue in compare my insides to the outsides of others, albeit not quite to the extent I did back then. My progress it slow. I have a filing cabinet filled with unfinished stories. Ideas that pop in, and then back out. One day, I tell myself. One day I’ll be strong enough to write without the fear of what others will think. For now, I’m still waiting. But thank you for re-igniting that spark of hope.
Ellen Chauvin says
I am currently working on memoir. Ok, well, I have the introduction written. I’ve ready many books on memoir, but Michelle, your tips here really resonate with me. I think I’ve been chasing, rather than following. What an insight! Thank you so much for sharing your wisdom.
Caroline TeSelle says
This hit home: “I’m more convinced than ever that a writer must know who she is before she can lead a reader through her story.”
Amy MAKECHNIE says
I’m a big fan of Michelle’s from listening to Michael Hyatt’s blog – but I had no idea she had suffered or lost so much. Reading this, about insecurity and discovering rather than smothering, not defending where none is needed, I felt myself wanting to run away. I recognize my insecurity and I’m scared of it. I want to learn more about how to have integrity at all times, even on the written page. Thanks for the opportunity to win this book. It looks fantastic.
kris says
Such a good reminder to not compare writings. We each have our own journey.